First things first, that intro has to go. You almost lost me there. You figured out how to use the bend note button on a shitty keyboard, way to go champ. Aside from that I really dig the music but I’m on the fence about the vocals. It’s rare I say this but you should stick to the high notes. Most singers are terrible when they go high but you’re nailing it. The song is a good blend of pop melodies and weird shit. Swag.